Apologies that you haven't had feedback on this yet. I assumed it had been done. I like your layout but your image needs a lot of work, it's so obviously school uniform because he still has his school lanyard on and I find that exceptionally lazy, sorry! I made explicitly clear at the start of this that the images need to be fit for purpose and not something done off the cuff. You HAVE to sort this. You also need to consider the connection between audience and magazine. Without an eye connection people won't buy your magazine.
You need to address this asap otherwise you will loose a substantial number of marks. All of your work needs to be completed, including contents page and double page spread by April 4th. Please start moving on to completing the cover and beginning your contents page and double page spread. I will have my camera in all week I advise you to consider some costume choices for your magazine.
Apologies that you haven't had feedback on this yet. I assumed it had been done.
ReplyDeleteI like your layout but your image needs a lot of work, it's so obviously school uniform because he still has his school lanyard on and I find that exceptionally lazy, sorry! I made explicitly clear at the start of this that the images need to be fit for purpose and not something done off the cuff. You HAVE to sort this. You also need to consider the connection between audience and magazine. Without an eye connection people won't buy your magazine.
You need to address this asap otherwise you will loose a substantial number of marks. All of your work needs to be completed, including contents page and double page spread by April 4th. Please start moving on to completing the cover and beginning your contents page and double page spread. I will have my camera in all week I advise you to consider some costume choices for your magazine.